Thesis

After reading the chapter, I have learned many ways to better my writing skills.  The ideas that stood out to me the most are how the thesis statement should have something pushing against it while also making a point. I always thought a thesis was a main subject stating the argument. Also the analogy of a camera lens is a creative way to think of a thesis statement. The clear and fuzzy lens explains how a thesis statement should be written, with a direction to evidence and the analysis of the evidence. My last paper about “Chicken Fried” and the student draft are different because I repeat my ideas throughout the paper and feel as if my thesis is not strong enough.